Third story..revenge on salesman

RiCharlie · 12-10-2011, 03:11 PM

O

kenchan · 12-10-2011, 03:23 PM

This is a joke post right? Too long

Baer383 · 12-10-2011, 03:44 PM

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Originally Posted by kenchan

This is a joke post right? Too long

RiCharlie · 12-11-2011, 08:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kenchan

This is a joke post right?

It's not a "joke post" in the sense of trying to fool someone..its a sci fi story about our Z cars in the distant future...intended to entertain and, hopefully, provide a few laughs..

haitech · 12-10-2011, 03:39 PM

Are we writing fantasy novels?

eastwest2300 · 12-11-2011, 01:14 AM

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Originally Posted by haitech

Are we writing fantasy novels?

11Thumper · 12-10-2011, 04:22 PM

I want those minutes of my life back...

OP must be bored to death

ImportConvert · 12-10-2011, 04:39 PM

Stopped reading after first 10 lines or so. 3 sentence summary?

Apoc370z · 12-10-2011, 04:49 PM

ZZzzz.....ZZzzzzz

Thechidz · 12-10-2011, 04:50 PM

I stopped reading at warp drive.

KillerBee370 · 12-11-2011, 11:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Thechidz

I stopped reading at warp drive.

I made it one paragraph past that...

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FL 4Motion · 12-11-2011, 11:48 PM

other story was better imo.

PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.

RiCharlie · 12-12-2011, 07:31 PM

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Originally Posted by FL 4Motion

other story was better imo.

PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.

Well good to get feedback..the other story was a bit on the dark side.,.this was something intended to be lighter.. I could write something really really black and on the dark side . but I did not think it would go over..

nepali · 01-02-2013, 10:43 AM

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Originally Posted by Thechidz

I stopped reading at warp drive.

Same here!

RiCharlie · 12-10-2011, 05:05 PM

Well I would be lying if I told you I was not unhappy with these first responses.

Of course this post just intended as a story.....just like the previous one about the Z which so many enjoyed. I thought I made that clear.

Well I have been writing and publishing things for years and sometimes editors and readers like things and sometimes they don't. Its something you learn to live with..

Guess the previous two stories went over well but not so well for this one..

Oh well..that's life..

And yes..for those that ask...a story about a car with "warp drive" is a fantasy..

12-10-2011, 03:11 PM	#1 (permalink)
RiCharlie Track Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Johnston RI Posts: 857 Drives: 370 Touring Spt A/t Rep Power: 16	Third story..revenge on salesman O Last edited by RiCharlie; 01-03-2013 at 01:57 AM. Reason: Clarify purpose of post

12-10-2011, 04:50 PM	#10 (permalink)
Thechidz A True Z Fanatic Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: NY Posts: 1,009 Drives: Nissan 370z Monti Bl Rep Power: 16	I stopped reading at warp drive. __________________ I <3 my car

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12-10-2011, 03:23 PM	#2 (permalink)
kenchan A True Z Fanatic Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: N/A Posts: 76,801 Drives: N/A Rep Power: 141521	This is a joke post right? Too long

12-10-2011, 03:39 PM	#5 (permalink)
haitech Track Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Austin/Dallas Posts: 922 Drives: 11' 370z Magnetic M6 Rep Power: 15	Are we writing fantasy novels?

12-10-2011, 04:22 PM	#7 (permalink)
11Thumper Track Member Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Bay Area, CA Posts: 754 Drives: '11 370Z, '01 S2k Rep Power: 18	I want those minutes of my life back... OP must be bored to death

12-10-2011, 04:39 PM	#8 (permalink)
ImportConvert A True Z Fanatic Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: SWMO Posts: 4,454 Drives: 2019 CX5 GT Reserve Rep Power: 7627	Stopped reading after first 10 lines or so. 3 sentence summary?

12-10-2011, 04:49 PM	#9 (permalink)
Apoc370z A True Z Fanatic Join Date: May 2011 Location: Orange County, CA Posts: 999 Drives: 2011 GM z34 Rep Power: 15	ZZzzz.....ZZzzzzz

12-11-2011, 11:48 PM	#12 (permalink)
FL 4Motion A True Z Fanatic Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: FL Posts: 4,776 Drives: Baby Shark Rep Power: 701616	other story was better imo. PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.

12-10-2011, 05:05 PM	#15 (permalink)
RiCharlie Track Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: Johnston RI Posts: 857 Drives: 370 Touring Spt A/t Rep Power: 16	Well I would be lying if I told you I was not unhappy with these first responses. Of course this post just intended as a story.....just like the previous one about the Z which so many enjoyed. I thought I made that clear. Well I have been writing and publishing things for years and sometimes editors and readers like things and sometimes they don't. Its something you learn to live with.. Guess the previous two stories went over well but not so well for this one.. Oh well..that's life.. And yes..for those that ask...a story about a car with "warp drive" is a fantasy..