Third story..revenge on salesman

RiCharlie · 12-11-2011, 09:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kenchan

This is a joke post right?

It's not a "joke post" in the sense of trying to fool someone..its a sci fi story about our Z cars in the distant future...intended to entertain and, hopefully, provide a few laughs..

bigsix · 12-11-2011, 02:18 PM

The first part of the story where you ask about the optional "feature" reminded me of the movie Total Recall when Arnold. S. wants to visit Mars. . .

I think the story would be better if you travelled to different countries and then got stuck in one of them where the car wouldn't turn on, etc... something like this. Where you have a real crisis.

KillerBee370 · 12-12-2011, 12:39 AM

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Originally Posted by Thechidz

I stopped reading at warp drive.

I made it one paragraph past that...

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FL 4Motion · 12-12-2011, 12:48 AM

other story was better imo.

PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.

Filipeanutz · 12-12-2011, 01:07 AM

Yeah I never made past "PS Apparently the purpose......."

PapoZalsa · 12-12-2011, 07:42 PM

Cliff Notes!

Damn long to read....

phelan · 12-12-2011, 07:43 PM

Scotty, I need more power!!!

RiCharlie · 12-12-2011, 08:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by FL 4Motion

other story was better imo.

PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.

Well good to get feedback..the other story was a bit on the dark side.,.this was something intended to be lighter.. I could write something really really black and on the dark side . but I did not think it would go over..

37ZERO · 01-02-2013, 03:31 AM

Urm...

DEpointfive0 · 01-02-2013, 03:43 AM

I'll come back to read this later, lol

It's way too long

nepali · 01-02-2013, 11:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Thechidz

I stopped reading at warp drive.

Same here!

12-12-2011, 07:42 PM	#21 (permalink)
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bigsix A True Z Fanatic Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Thailand Posts: 2,227 Drives: Honda City/Mazda 2 Rep Power: 19	The first part of the story where you ask about the optional "feature" reminded me of the movie Total Recall when Arnold. S. wants to visit Mars. . . I think the story would be better if you travelled to different countries and then got stuck in one of them where the car wouldn't turn on, etc... something like this. Where you have a real crisis.

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FL 4Motion A True Z Fanatic Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: FL Posts: 4,776 Drives: Baby Shark Rep Power: 701615	other story was better imo. PS-everyone knows in order to fix a warp drive, you need a wookie.

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DEpointfive0 Premium Member Bitches Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: SoCal Posts: 14,824 Drives: a lot Rep Power: 17151	I'll come back to read this later, lol It's way too long