Originally Posted by phelan

vivid's response was pretty good IMO. but each photographer has their own tastes, and how they want to convey what they take.

personally i don't like the overexposure on the background and would try to dim that a little bit to better accentuate the foreground. as mentioned previously, cut back on the clarity and sharpness to give the lines a little more natural look; right now they look almost serrated with how sharp they are. white balance warmer to remove the bluish tint on the white paint.

but that's just me.